…..bits and pieces from the class
Seymore’s Adventure’s in Africa Chapter 9 (h)
The dinosaur egg started hatching a baby dinosaur came out of the egg and the baby dinosaur started crying the mummy dinosaur came and she was very angry someone had stolen the eggs and Seymore and his friends did a runner.
This is really imaginative, and I love the bit where they run away! Maybe you include some full stops and comas to make it even better. I really like!:)